let the right one in

I am doing a practice storyboard sketch of a scene in the swedish film " let the right one in"
Just practicing and trying to understand composition.

sumo vs the squid

sumo vs the squid

This is just the drawing so far

storyboard 2

I talked with my brother about storyboard and character design and he gave me some good tips.
so I redrew the storyboard again
same story but more clear

story board

spaceman